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Jeremy's avatar

Just inspired me to write, literally opening the doc now. Job well done man!

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Brian Wiesner's avatar

Thanks for reading my shitty sentences and giving feedback, I'm trying to poop on Mona Lisa's face less :)

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Chris James's avatar

Haha, dude aren’t we all

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Rizwan's avatar

Great post! I have finally come to terms with rewriting and see it as critical to great writing. Thanks for sharing the list of things you look for when editing. The one thing that trips me up is the "You" and "We" frame. I'm not sure which is better to convey a message.

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Chris James's avatar

My is writing is almost all in the “I” frame

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